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Title: Another piece
Post by: thrillseeker on October 14, 2004, 12:48:39 PM

i did this one is history of graphic design class ...yes d teacher was dat boring!!!!!!!

(http://gatt.carigamers.com/forums/archive_in/fear.jpg)                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: ShinSagat on October 14, 2004, 01:12:44 PM

Just curious but what is your style ? is it like simple with dread text or around a logo cuz i like it but yuh shoulda use a more retro background                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: thrillseeker on October 14, 2004, 01:51:33 PM

oh ok kool ..Shin
...nah i have different patterns in it
i just was playing up with it a little trying to get the hang of this thing here
we ain't start it in school yet but if i have some experience b4 we learn better 4 me                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: Mugsy on October 19, 2004, 05:16:47 PM

not bad nut the retro background aint cuttin wit the plain colour at the bottom                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: Frozen on October 19, 2004, 05:22:17 PM

That is kinda lame to be honest..too plain                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: New Era Outlaw on October 19, 2004, 07:41:10 PM

I'm sorry.
As is, that pic just looks like a random mish-mash of Photoshop tools, without direction or inspiration. I understand that you did this while you were bored, but still. I think you should have put this in the Junk Art thread to show that it's not really a finished piece, just some work that you just happened to conjure up in class, instead of giving this its own thread.

Once again, I'm sorry.                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: ShinSagat on October 23, 2004, 06:15:19 PM

I say toss that kinda ting in d junk art thread so that yuh could at least get advice on how to make it better                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: thrillseeker on October 23, 2004, 11:38:01 PM

okay nah u critics i didn't know and i doh need much guidance right now...thats y i doing graphics design as meh major..ppl doh born with experience yuh know...except maybe in crying....and no offence taken anywayz....                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: Frozen on October 24, 2004, 09:59:36 PM

well u shud post more of ur later work to see how u improve...u can ask some feedback from us "critics"                    

Title: Another piece
Post by: Shogun on November 15, 2004, 02:15:58 AM

Fellas if yuh really going to critic someones work the least you can do is be specific in your criticisms.

Thrillseeker, the first thing that i noticed with your peice was that i could not read the text properly. The distortions and the effects were a bit too much. remember that if your are putting text that is meant to be read then you should be able to read it easily.

by the way, i like the spawn eyes :P i wonder if anyone else noticed them.
                     

Title: Another piece
Post by: Frozen on November 15, 2004, 03:03:37 AM

They're not spawn eyes..they are archon eyes
To tell u the problem with the pic...nothing blends...at all
I find the colors dont match and when u added the archon eyes make them look like a part of the pic not like if they were added from elsewhere(You can see the box outline of it)